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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-06-11 04:59 PM



Senryu Song

soft inspiration
he doth give me, my one love
to assuage my grief

in welcome arms held
through my nights of tender dream
soft, inspiration

I would seek him now
“come to me,” I would beseech
he would rush, indeed

his heart is left here
his soul then flies through the nights
inspiring, softly



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1 posted 2001-06-11 05:01 PM


Ah, so soft, and lovely.  Such a beautiful thought this was.

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-06-11 06:00 PM


soul flies as bidden
carrying inspiration
longing for your verse

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3 posted 2001-06-11 06:09 PM


softly inspiring indeed. . .

well done. . .  

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4 posted 2001-06-11 06:13 PM


A sweet song it is.

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5 posted 2001-06-11 09:47 PM


Soft as a whisper these are.  Nicely penned.

Poeminister

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6 posted 2001-06-11 09:51 PM


*sigh*.....  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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7 posted 2001-06-19 10:54 AM


Thank you for your kind replies....this one liked me, as well....
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