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Open Poetry #14

A Maiden's Heart

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-06-11 03:41 PM

A Maiden’s Heart

search now thy heart
once again
young maiden

seek thee that love
which was spoken to
you in hushed,
sweet voice,

the timber of which
still courses
through thy soul

oh, hast thou once
thought of him,
then,
that thy eyes have not
opened to seek
the light

nay, not once, but
every morn,
and in his absence
the tears well prompt and
inevitable, then
every eve…

in hopes that the morn
should bring blue

and a voice honeyed of
tone

and hands that will then
stay, come eve….

and believe, oh yes
accept as true
this love he has of you,

and that he shall come, again…

write with grace, all others lose face;
"Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2001-06-11 03:53 PM

*sigh* this is such a lovely gem, more than wonderful.
excellent done.
Charisma

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-06-11 03:57 PM

Lady,
Very well done. *L*

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-06-11 04:24 PM

very lovely... indeed

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-06-11 04:38 PM

So romantically written. Well done.

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2001-06-11 04:55 PM

Ah, romance...Lady writes of it well.

Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

6 posted 2001-06-11 06:18 PM

Love, once found, is always remembered and held onto, isn't it? I know of this love.

Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment.

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

7 posted 2001-06-11 06:24 PM

Beautiful and softly penned...lovely write.

Poeminister

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

8 posted 2001-06-12 12:25 PM

Thank you all for your lovely replies....

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