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Lonely Shadow
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0 posted 2001-06-11 01:19 PM


closing my eyes
blinded by the radiance
of this wonderful woman
this angel who stands before me
oh how I love her
her gentle smile, her loving heart
her beautiful presence
feeling her passionate spirit
surrounding me
sending my heart soaring

softly I begin to weep
overjoyed of my happiness
remembering feelings I had lost
but now have found again
she has mended my heart
gently taking hold
filling it wil love and joy
giving me the strength
the courage to face my fears
to fight off my inner demons

am I worthy
of such a precious gift?
I gaze into her eyes
holding her close
my voice soft as I whisper "I love you"
slowly drawing in
pressing my lips to hers
kissing her so tenderly
slowly breaking our kiss
as I hear her gentle words
"and I love you"

with a gentle sigh
I thank the lord above
for bringing her into my life
thanking god for her love
that fills my heart
for letting me fall in love with her
for finding a reason to live again

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

© Copyright 2001 Lonely Shadow - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2001-06-11 01:34 PM


Beautiful romantic poem!  You have a second chance and that's marvelous!
Tovi
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2 posted 2001-06-11 02:05 PM


Beautiful emotion and flow.  A lucky woman, I would say.  Love does bring much hope.  

Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment.

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3 posted 2001-06-11 03:22 PM


beautiful heartfelt write.

love it.

Charisma

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4 posted 2001-06-11 06:33 PM


now, this is what we need around here. . . some more Romance. . .  

great job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

snowpants
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KS
5 posted 2001-06-11 06:50 PM


That kind of inspiration to go on is the best kind, isn't it?  Wonderful write, LS!

sp  

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

zzz
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6 posted 2001-06-11 07:43 PM


ah how romantic  just beautiful  may the love you share last forever
shadowsbabygirl
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7 posted 2001-06-11 08:31 PM


wonderful poem my love!!! and theyre right, i am a lucky girl!!!!! and im happy you are once again writin the happy stuff!!!!!!!! i love you sweetie pie!
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