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Open Poetry #14

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theLadypoet
Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 97
Or USA

0 posted 2001-06-11 12:26 PM

Wings folded
like a nun at prayer,
the moth celebrates
mass on the altar of
the lightbulb's
yellow glare.

"A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

1 posted 2001-06-11 12:38 PM

HAHAHAHAHAHA, fantastic little funny poem, yet again your showing that true genious . I love the thought of the Moth squating on it's knees on the lightbulb - brilliant imagery as ever, Thanks .
L.of.L. Tommy .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

2 posted 2001-06-11 01:48 PM

WOW this is such a sweety Ladypoet, very nice done.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

JCGF
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 72
MA

3 posted 2001-06-11 04:09 PM

It's amazing how you put together just a few words that create such a vivid, pretty picture. Thank you for the smile.

Tammy

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