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Hostile Friendship
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Hostile Friendship |
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JCGF Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 72MA |
Friendship lost, friendship stolen. My heart is broken, my eye's are swolen. As I look into the past, I want to cry. Dry tears are all I have. While thinking about this, I sadly sigh. Two people that love eachother, inflicted so much pain. throwing words, cutting like a sword. blood shed is all that's gained. I loved you! I tried to proove that I was a friend. I couldn't help but care for you, yet it came to an end. Lost, is what I feel. Yey my defence is like an armor of steel. You can't hurt me, I won't let you! Yet you have, somehow you got through. Please, let's end this hostile feud. Let's stop adding fuel to the fire. I'm exhausted and from this war, I retire! For D |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
After all what is gained from constant fighting and bickering! I think you've presented this well and thanks! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Retiring from a battle no one wins..shows as much valor and wisdom as anything... made me think of a poem I wrote about friends..... Friends Somewhere in the darkness You think will never end There is a candle burning Kept there by a friend Through the blackest hours When lost to all it seems Someone will be waiting As a keeper of your dreams Though the world around you Fades in shades of grey Mine is the hand that reaches out To help you find your way So let me hold you closer And chase away the fears As I keep the candle burning And soak up all your tears |
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JCGF Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 72MA |
Ethome, thank you again for your kind words and thanks for taking the time to read! Cpat, thank you for sharing your poem with me. It's wonderful and much appreciated. Warm smile. |
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