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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-06-11 08:35 AM



Let me now…
Sweep the stars from
Heaven’s orb with
The wave of my hat
And capture again
The jewels lost to God
When you came to earth.

Presenting them  
one…
By
one…
As you sit and
sort for brilliance,
and size,to string
Them on threads
Of finest hope,
For the Moon to wear
In her nightly dance.

Let me then…
Wander in the vast
And unknown depths
Of your eyes
As I once again attempt
To touch the stars…
And capture the
Beauty I see
In you

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1 posted 2001-06-11 09:03 AM


This....is absolutely wonderful, and is following me directly to my library....

I do so love collecting keepers....

Charisma
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2 posted 2001-06-11 09:13 AM


oh how beautiful written....loved it very, very much.

Charisma

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3 posted 2001-06-11 09:31 AM


Goodness, you could certainly sweep a woman off her feet with this one, swoooooooooon, sigh ahhhhhhhhh.
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4 posted 2001-06-12 03:06 PM


Beautiful imagery in a well woven piece.  I enjoyed the read immensely.
Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2001-06-12 03:10 PM


*sigh*....what more can I say?

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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6 posted 2001-06-12 08:37 PM


now I know how this feels. . . I've captured the stars before. . .

great job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JLR
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7 posted 2001-06-13 08:53 AM


A beauty well captured...in words!
Tara Simms
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8 posted 2001-06-13 11:16 AM


This is simply gorgeous!  I would melt if a man wrote this for me.
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9 posted 2001-06-13 11:26 AM


Such beauty expressed.  Very nice writing.
Martie
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10 posted 2001-06-13 11:43 AM


Cpat--

As I once again attempt
To touch the stars…
And capture the
Beauty I see
In you

You have captured it well!

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