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thecraig
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since 2001-03-11
Posts 223


0 posted 2001-06-11 06:04 AM



How easy to reach up above where the stars shine,
holding hands, finger, saying,
sun's
is this light mine?

Pin pricks through the blanket,
now is time to stop the cowering,
something special on the other side,
shall not trap this flowering;

The metal may not stay.
Shall wait upon that day,
when the pin is pulled away,
cover starts to fray,
Free!
to try the way.
Where opening draws beyond this tiresome bed,
A pattern written where other pricks have led;      

© Copyright 2001 Craig Poole - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2001-06-11 06:58 AM


Very interesting thought provoking poem!
Watersign6
Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823
Hurricane,WV
2 posted 2001-06-11 07:01 AM


wow,this really makes me think and in a good way,I enjoy this very much  
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