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Cheryl Flemming
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since 2000-09-14
Posts 102


0 posted 2001-06-10 06:57 PM



My body is hungry
For your heavenly touch
My heart is crying
For I miss you so much
My arms are searching
To hold you tight
My mind is saying
Hurry home tonight
Your gentle voice
Soothes my soul
Your gentle touch
I loose control
I need your love
Or I can't breathe
For your love is the oxygen
That runs through me
And when I feel
Short of breathe
I touch my heart
And I'm at rest
For you bring life
Back into me
I love you
For all eternity

© Copyright 2001 Cheryl Flemming - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
1 posted 2001-06-10 07:07 PM


You wrote so well and he is a lucky guy.

Titia

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Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25
Posts 823
Hurricane,WV
2 posted 2001-06-10 09:16 PM


oh my! you write with such emotion and love that it is absolutely amazing  
Cheryl Flemming
Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102

3 posted 2001-06-11 04:20 PM


Titia thank you for your kind words.I feel like I am the lucky one.SMILE


Watersign6 thank you for the wonderful compliment and for reading others that I have posted.It means so much to me.

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
4 posted 2001-06-12 09:31 PM


Wonderfully romantic write, Cheryl...I really enjoyed it...

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I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-02-05 10:06 PM




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (kiss on chek) We all loe you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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