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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-06-10 06:05 PM


Reaching

in thirteen count he wrote “descending”, I in reaching
never downward, wanting to emulate in reaching
for I go across, or up, but always, I’m reaching
for one thing, happiness, in this quest, I am reaching
for life and living, in continually reaching
for pursuits well beyond my grasp, but still, in reaching
I feel the beat of wing, the well of Hope, for reaching
allows the stretch of mental limbs, for in this reaching
I am self-teaching to never quit in my reaching
and with five lines to go, my finish line is reaching
out before me, I, gasping, strides marking this reaching
of soul’s goal, wonder if I shall expire, reaching
out for this destiny I have prescribed in my reaching
for this last line, hoping now to find you come reaching.

thank you Poet Dave Smith.


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Logan
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1 posted 2001-06-10 06:15 PM


Yes, Sunshine, I will reach with you, as I am always reaching after learning that as I grew old, I was very ignorant indeed, so reach I do, and hope to learn just a bit of the world...gentle smile, nice thoughts, nice pondering. enjoyed very much
catalinamoon
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2 posted 2001-06-10 07:41 PM


Interesting and full of strength.
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3 posted 2001-06-10 07:56 PM


thoughtful poem, unfortunately i don't reach out enough.
pres

Watersign6
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4 posted 2001-06-10 08:03 PM


this poem is very inspirational and makes me think and that i enjoy,thanks Sunshine  
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5 posted 2001-06-10 08:55 PM


May we always reach...there are things that do not exceed our grasp..
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6 posted 2001-06-11 01:33 AM


I shall always reach, for in the reaching there is always hope and new horizons yet to see.  Enjoyed this much!

Nathaniel

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7 posted 2001-06-11 04:05 AM


This IS inspirational...

Thanks for your poetry...

Regards to you, Karilea,
Sudhir

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8 posted 2001-06-11 07:40 AM


that is why we have eyes and ears and minds... to always be seeing or hearing or thinking of those things we can not quite in our current state touch...

nice device and form..



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9 posted 2001-06-11 07:45 AM


may I reach with you, as we are never to old to reach out for life, Hope and so many more.
Thank you for sharing these inspirital words.

((hugs))
Charisma

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10 posted 2001-06-11 12:57 PM


There is no thing on earth that rays of sunshine can't reach...
wonderful write.

Poeminister

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11 posted 2001-06-11 05:37 PM


Kari dearest sister of my heart, and I will say that in reaching out you have reached for my hand and I hope will always drag me trailing behind. Content to always be in Sun's shadow. Where the light is tender

Fabulous writing as always dear heart
Take care
               Love as ever
                   Puck
                    

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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