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A Long Kiss
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A Long Kiss |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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A long kiss on the lips with love all around you, like gentle touching blossoms soft and wet, is filled with a nectar to drug and blind you, bringing glowing hypnotic waves from the chest. A long kiss savoured is insanity flavoured; a craving for dreamers to taste the prize for yeilding hearts that send all human reason adrift in circles of love in the mind. A long kiss speaks, but not words you can conquer. A long kiss sings, but not songs you can sing. A long kiss sails on the windsongs of matter caught up in the flight of an alien on wing. A long kiss can torch your heart to continue burning with fire long after it's over a flame left roaring deep within you a molten addiction invading the sober. A long kiss can heal diminished duende a soothing connection for those with a gift. And words can't flatter those few precious moments when visions of true love come from within. Celtrue2000@E3B1G9 The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
WOW!!! incredible,,very nicely done...gentle smile |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like long kisses...and short ones...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
oh.....wow...... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
my friend. . . you make me want several. . . absolutely amazing. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And I shall tell you the best about a long kiss...its memory stays with you long, long after the kiss. These are what sweet memories are made that are treased, that is for sure! Beautiful, just beautiful! ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a description!  Here's a kiss from me to you for writing this awesome piece  Take care, Melissa~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Indeed, the flame bestowed by a long kiss grows long everafter the moment...beautiful write. PM |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Logan for those words! Thanks James for reading! Sunshine glad you could wow in! Sven thanks for the comment and I hope you get your wish! Mysteria I know what you mean by the memory! Melissa I thank you I wish I was closer so I could collect....I just dream about them instead! Thanks! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Poeminister you snuck in on me....I thank you for reading! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ethome--you know just what to say..this is beautiful and true. [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 06-10-2001).] |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Short kiss, long kiss, red kiss, blue kiss...they're all great. Enjoyed! |
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pres56 Junior Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 28 |
Truly beautiful poem. pres |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Delicious thoughts on kisses. Definitely puts one in the mood for love. Sandra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This was almost a good as the actual thing! Made me wanna light candles and slow dance...and?  |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
An intresting side-effect of long kisses, probably due to the fact that the participants are breathing in carbon dioxide from each other instead of oxygen, is that one tends to get a little dizzy after a while and feel the need to lay down.....at least I think that's why Good poem, ethome |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ This is obviously an inspired piece ???  God, ya' gotta just LOVE JamesMichael's reply !  Well, I do !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Very tender and so beautiful.....thanks... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I loved it...every line. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A long kiss savoured is insanity flavoured; a craving for dreamers to taste the prize for yeilding hearts that send all human reason adrift in circles of love in the mind ============================= A long kiss can torch your heart to continue burning with fire long after it's over a flame left roaring deep within you a molten addiction invading the sober. A long kiss can heal diminished duende a soothing connection for those with a gift. And words can't flatter those few precious moments when visions of true love come from within. ======================= Ahhhh Poetic Lip lock....my favorite kind of verse E-babes...this is lip smaking luscious... and romantic as wine and candles... (make it raspberry wine and Im there) LOL very nice write of passion born in the lips. You can write about anything and make it groovy  |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
   as you can see I really enjoyed this one |
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theLadypoet Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 97Or USA |
***Ladypoet sighs dreamily...lamenting there will be no more long kisses for her.*** (((((((((((ethome))))))))))))))) :* So silky and tender...wonderful poem. theLadypoet  :kissing:  h boy:"A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Im so glad you posted this here sweet poet man....and if you give me a jillion of these? HEHEHEHE...... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
wonderful writing from you, my friend... Regards to you, Sudhir |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done.. full of the idea and the emotion behind a long kiss... |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'A long kiss savoured is insanity flavoured; a craving for dreamers to taste the prize for yeilding hearts that send all human reason adrift in circles of love in the mind.' Oh, these are some great lines, ethome! You've got a wonderful gift for writing this sort of thing...excellent write...I really enjoyed this... sp  I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
This is beautiful.So soft and tender! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wow!, Did I love this poem! Very well spoken, my friend I could have read on and on THanks for the kiss Liz |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Yes sir. Definitely stirs emotions. Melton |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks so much to everybody..... Martie JLR pres56 catalinamoon Serenity Balladeer Marge Greeeyes Irish Rose Janet Marie watersign6 the Ladypoet Paula Finn Sudhir Leyer Cpat Hair Snowpants Cheryl Flemming Elizabeth Santos 2dalimit I'm so appreciative of all your comments! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Where's the oxygen? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'll make sure you can come up for air! Thanks for the reply Decaflame! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Mmm....I love it. I could certainly use one of those now! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
masterful o yuh! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
came back, just to sigh, exhaling after inhaling poetic bliss...oh and of course? LIBRARY!!!! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
ethome- wow...you write it beautifully.. and now, a kiss for you... hugs, ~vicky Marge- ME TOO!!  "...until you have read the verse on his |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Absolutely stunning poetry Ethome... I enjoyed reading every word... Hugs2uSweetie *~Coco~* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's been entirely too long since I've experienced a long kiss (or a short one, for that matter! LOL) .... but I do remember I prefer participating in them to reading about them! LOL. Still, they're not available... and this poem flows so beautifully and the rhyme is so fine... It and memories leave me smiling. *S* Well done! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Smitten Kitten for the comment I appreciate it so much. Walt ...always good to hear from you ....down in Fart Worth....thanks! Thanks Celeste I appreciate that...now if I can only figure a way out of your library to give you one of these!! Vlraynes thanks so much for the wonderful kiss it was so nice!! Coco I want to thank ya for the hugs and for taking the time to read this piece! Well suthern it's about time that someone laid on on ya..........don't give up it's coming I lnow it is!! Never give up and thanks for the kind words!! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Walker I appreciate the comment! |
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