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Bilal
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since 2000-12-13

Posts 66

0 posted 2001-06-10 03:37 PM

See that I love you
Lancelot © 2001

I could just love
Love till you conceive
Conceive what we believe
Beleive what we see
See that I love you

I could understand
Understand your life
Life God gave you
You for me to see
See that I love you

I could bare with you
You'll see that I can
Can I love you forever
Forever I want to see
See that I love you

I could feel and want
Want me to be there
There always for you
You to dream and see
See that I love you

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2001-06-10 04:21 PM

LOVELY!!!

wonderfully beautiful....

... and i see.... i do see... love in these words....

very nice

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-06-10 04:56 PM

I like the way this format worked out!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-06-10 05:15 PM

Bilal~
I enjoyed this
This part of you
You shared with Passions
Passions friends are love
Love is universal !

Well, that was refreshing !
Enjoyed muchly.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Bilal
Member

since 2000-12-13

Posts 66

4 posted 2001-06-11 01:38 AM

I thank you all for your kind comments and uplifting encouragement. Bless you all.
Bilal

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

5 posted 2001-06-12 07:22 PM

Fantastic work, Bilal...I love the style...great write!

sp

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-06-12 07:40 PM

What a neat form!! Nice work!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Bilal
Member

since 2000-12-13

Posts 66

7 posted 2001-07-05 08:33 PM

Thanks a million for your encouragement. I really appreciate your support.
Bilal

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

8 posted 2001-07-07 11:43 AM

Like the way you've written this poem

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Bilal
Member

since 2000-12-13

Posts 66

9 posted 2001-07-07 03:06 PM

thank you very much. I don't know how it happened but it sure happened.
Bilal

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2001-07-08 11:24 AM

liked it

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

11 posted 2001-07-08 01:33 PM

Thin thread whose tinsel strength assures a strong Love runs it's length.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

Bilal
Member

since 2000-12-13

Posts 66

12 posted 2001-07-08 07:15 PM

Thanks a million Vandana & RSWells for responding to my poem. I really appreciate it and am glad that you liked my work.
Bilal

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