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kaile
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0 posted 2001-06-10 03:06 PM


Children waving hi
Innocence exemplified
I wave back, smiling

© Copyright 2001 heng kaile - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-10 03:20 PM


They do bring out the best in us, don't they?     You captured it well.  

Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment.

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2 posted 2001-06-10 03:28 PM


nicely done,.....love it.

Charisma

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3 posted 2001-06-10 04:56 PM


Sweet!
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4 posted 2001-06-10 04:57 PM


Ah see?  Poetry everywhere!
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5 posted 2001-06-10 05:11 PM


Kaile~
I LOVE IT !
It's so YOU !
*waving* and *smiling*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-06-10 06:22 PM






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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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7 posted 2001-06-10 06:47 PM


Aren't they sweet, faterider, and so is your senryu!
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8 posted 2001-06-10 06:54 PM


I always do too, waving back.

Beautiful senryu

Titia

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Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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9 posted 2001-06-10 10:15 PM



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