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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Wilted Heart Tanka  At calm of mourning wake not this rose of my heart it dreams of love's beat embracing thorns and petals wilting in yesterday lost  By Melissa Honeybee |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ My gosh ... how beautiful is this ???? Just tooooooooo ! WOW ! What a lovely sight to see ! You da' Tanka-Bomb-Baby !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful tanka showing rosepetals and thorns protecting sweet dreams floating upon lover's beat don't awake rose for mourning ~*~ you penned a great Tanka ....like it a lot. Charisma |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Melissa, this is a wonderful Tanka and a wonderful presentation. I must try this form someday.  Parker |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A beautiful metaphorical poem linking a past love to the qualities of the rose! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
it has been a while since i read your tankas and i must say that it has been WAY too long... keep up the good work here! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I love the way you do Tanka.. beautifully penned. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you for reading everyone! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Beautifully done Melissa.. ~Victoria~
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