Open Poetry #14 |
mwhaaaaa haaaaaa haaaaaa |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Virginia Salter fiddle, diddle, man in the middle watching and waiting for noon grabbed a fork and then a knife he slipped through the day with a spoon rhubarb sauce and lemon pie the tartness that they play singes the tongue with acidity and stifles the light of the day how so, you say, how could that be how might something eaten bring the dark well linger awhile in the salty pool and be eaten by a shark chomp and squirm, wriggle and twist scream to your heart’s content the grossness of the hour you see needs no condiment is this morose, is this a pall or is it just apalling? I could end this poem in a moment now, but I guess that I’m just stalling for in my odd and giggly way I find this entertaining I don’t know why this has come to me but I hear no one complaining mwhaaaaa haaaaaa haaaaaa © June 8, 2000 |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I read the lines and said them loud I read them one more time But time is at a premium Though you waste it so 'Devine' |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, Rex, at least I think so? LOL |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
LOL I read this with a grin from ear to ear You've written a '10' ... in my books |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
VAS, you have me looking for the right time to jump in with my knife, fork and spoon!! Love it, ME |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Be my guest....just jump in and eat up life...there's no better time than when life's happenin'!!! And thanks, LOADS!! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
mwhaaaaa haaaaaa haaaaaa oh my...can't stop laughing..... mwhaaaaa haaaaaa haaaaaa oh my....love it VAS....LOL |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
no, grin, you will hear no one complaining as this was quite intertaining...gentle smile |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ha! you just made me chuckle! |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
I love humor! And you write it very well. Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I enjoyed this, Virginia! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"The time has come," the Walrus said "to speak of many things, of shoes and ships and sealing wax and cabbages and kings and whether the sea is boiling hot and whether pigs have wings." "But wait awhile," the oysters cried "before we have our chat, most of us are out of breath and all of us are fat." "No hurry," said the Carpenter they thanked him much for that. "A loaf of bread," the Walrus said, "is what we chiefly need, some pepper and vinager too would be very good indeed and then oysters dear we can begin our feed!" "But not on us," the oysters cried feeling a little blue, "after such kindness that would be a dismal thing to do!" The Carpenter said nothing but, "do you admire the view?" They are so good when you use pepper and vinager.! (can't remember the author) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
It's out of Alice Through the Looking Glass...Lewis Carroll. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I am grinning ear to ear! ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Fantastic, Virginia!!! ....and such a catchy title! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
That's just what I needed before bedtime, keeps me giggling (don't know how to write that) all night Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
hehehe very funny poem,made me LOL! thanks |
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