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Tovi
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0 posted 2001-06-10 08:49 AM


She's in love
and like the sky at sunset
even I,
stand held in a trance
as she's awakened
And her colors, carressed
by his gentle hands
sparkle and flow deep
Enriched by that awesome beauty
of love

Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment.

© Copyright 2001 Tovi Borden - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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1 posted 2001-06-10 09:00 AM


Lovely and tender write, Tovi.  Great work!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-06-10 09:11 AM


Tovi, you write so delicately....this is wonderful....
Logan
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3 posted 2001-06-10 01:24 PM


Aww, Tovi, sweetness in itself...gentle smile
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4 posted 2001-06-10 02:38 PM


Tovi~
Nice !
~*Marge*~

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ethome
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5 posted 2001-06-10 03:27 PM


This is a lovely poem Tovi!....I enjoyed it very much!
Tovi
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6 posted 2001-06-10 04:19 PM


Thanks so much everyone.     

Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment.

vandana
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7 posted 2001-06-10 05:51 PM


loved it
Poeminister
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8 posted 2001-06-10 05:52 PM


Beautiful.  Lovely write.


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