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Collecting |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Collecting the quietness of the sounds colliding within lead me to my awake, bring me to the cat’s stretch, in moments, sheets back, limbs overboard and body leading mind I find myself collecting where the sun is searching the dew to alight and bring a fairy her warmth the golden orb lifting, exploring the novel of the day, “what to see!” wind, on the turnaround, bringing quiet song and lifting birds’ calls to cotton, shooshing music gently through leaves of supple silk, freshets of thought stumbling, rushing to bring the snow’s liquid to a green valley’s delight collecting on its way,  diamonds as easily picked to be examined and admired by only those who know that in my paper-bag-knapsack of childhood recollections, among the feathers and rocks, strings and papers, leaves and twigs morning is always the best time of day to begin collecting…. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 06-10-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
freshets of thought stumbling, rushing to bring the snow’s liquid to a green valley’s delight collecting on its way, diamonds as easily picked to be examined and admired by only those who know that in my paper-bag-knapsack of childhood recollections, among the feathers and rocks, strings and papers, leaves and twigs morning is always the best time of day to begin collecting…. ======================= yes it tis...and on this morning... I shall collect poetry...  beautiful thoughts for this morn poetess sun  |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Let the 'Sun shine in' way to write em 'Sunshine'  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This is so wonderful. I love this form you're using...the way your collections scatter down the page, a lovely array. My favorite is the sun's liquid ....valley's green, what a lovely way to say it. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ You little collector you ! I LOVE this ... yes I do ! But ... you already knew that !  Trickle-down thoughts ... sifted gently ... What a wonderful way to start a day ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great title for this piece Karilea! Another amazing work! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Karilea, this is beautiful!!! Very lovely!!! |
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Nathaniel Shain Junior Member
since 2001-06-03
Posts 35 |
Sunshine, I liked this so much. Such pretty thoughts. Nathaniel |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
So what was, is. Nice thoughts from child to adult, hopefully the adult still sees with the wonderment of the child in collecting...ahh, Sunshine, you do bring the thoughts to bear...gentle smile |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
that in my paper-bag-knapsack of childhood recollections, among the feathers and rocks, strings and papers, leaves and twigs morning is always the best time of day to begin collecting…. *** yes the morning is the best time of day to start collecting. love those lines Karilea. (((hugs))) Charisma |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aha! I've uncovered a covey of packrats, just like me....{~,^} Thank you so very much for bringing this in to your collection of reading..... and for sharing your wonderful thoughts! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How you DO knit together words and thoughts in a pattern unique to your style. Refreshing. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Morning is a great time of day. Everything newly awakening to a fresh day. I felt like I was watching it happen as I read. Hope that's ok! All writing comes |
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