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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2001-06-09 09:52 PM


My heart is like an M&M
A hard shell cover outside
The sweetness in the middle
Is all the shell will hide

I will not melt in your mouth
Nor in your hand I fear
This candy will not be devoured
Not by just anyone here

Looks may be deceiving
And you may want to enter
But remember, there just may be
A peanut at the center

Crispy may not be in my soul
Nor nuts be upon my heart
But once you feel the love I have
You can’t stop once you start!


*Thanks for asking Melissa!  



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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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since 2001-06-02
Posts 190

1 posted 2001-06-09 09:56 PM


I loved this, playful and charming
Thank you
Mr»ÄlleÿÇät


Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
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2 posted 2001-06-09 10:00 PM




I love it!     This is just so cute and clever. It's getting more and more difficult to choose a favourite poem by you, but, I think this one is in the top 3! Into my library this goes~

*Thank you for re-posting it*

Take care,
Melissa~

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2001-06-10 07:36 PM


Very cute, love this. Shall we try to send it to the M&M people for their next commercial?
Sandra

Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25
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4 posted 2001-06-10 09:02 PM


very cute and enjoyable also I love M&M's

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