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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Wishing my lips had been sealed from a touch, as pain stings from it's memory. In solitude, I bathe in thoughts, unscented, stark, as a coldness penetrates each pour of you. No warmth this day, no shine seeks me out. With the ease of a summer's breeze, you have drifted away, leaving behind an emptiness and a longing of an almost love. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, gentle person, the breeze never stops blowing and will bring once again love to your door...gentle smile..very nicely done |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sad sigh) I know so very well how it feels to be marooned from the warmth of such a love, and how times can be so deceiving and play sad tricks on all of us. (sad sigh) I hope this isn't a situation you have faced, but if it is something you've endured, remember that you've gained something out of it, and your beautiful heart floods with love that will lead you to find the most beautiful love you can ever dream of! (sigh) A sad but well-written poem! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Your word usage and imagery in this is stunning. Captured all by the last line. Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is utterly moving, keep writing, Maureen, write it out Kathleen Blake |
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