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0 posted 2001-06-09 03:45 PM


Awakening Of The Cherubs
By: Noah Eaton

The brilliant haze of the morning dawns down upon the river through the ravine in which I am sailing down
It crosses the delta of the silences of my memories, onto the driftwoods of my many dreams
I awaken as the appeasing whisper of a harbinger of a love emanates through my ears within the tangible breath of a warm wind like the easing slide of the summer rain off of the leaves of a banyun tree

Her sigh of endearment encircles me like the cool breeze of a hurricane that escapes from the sea
As the flash of disarray descended upon me, she unfolded her wings of light to let me speak
“As I aroused from your soft voice” I said to her, “I knew that you had come to help me learn of the ecstacy it means to be!” when the wind suddenly painted an enduring smile and rounded me

“You will grow stronger, and you’ll find out that deep within the trail to fortune you cannot doubt that there will stand an utmost power of love that flows like the smooth stream of a morning undertode in which will guide you to your boldest destiny!” the voice of the learned wind said to me.

“My wings will reform in time, and I shall find the gates to a forthcoming life of joy that’s divine!” I answered as she ascended to the misty atmosphere and burst through my soul and on to the great beyond from here
It is a vital quest in awakening the cherubs, but all we ever need to make this possible is spread a little love

Copyright 2000
Noah Eaton
9/20/00

© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
Logan
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1 posted 2001-06-09 03:49 PM


“You will grow stronger, and you’ll find out that deep within the trail to fortune you cannot doubt that there will stand an utmost power of love that flows like the smooth stream of a morning undertode in which will guide you to your boldest destiny!” the voice of the learned wind said to me.

Bold, true lines ever spoke..this is so great, all of it, but love this stanza..very well done, Noah...gentle smile

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2 posted 2001-06-09 03:53 PM


Noah,

   There are many lines I love from this.  Your style of writing is wonderful.. something I can't seem to do... believed me I've tried..lol. Well done

TaraB

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3 posted 2001-06-09 04:57 PM


Ah, I see you are trying to gather yourself for the future, as I am. Excellent, beautiful writing here. Stay hopeful.
Luv
Sandra

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4 posted 2001-06-09 06:46 PM


Lovely write, Noah.  Makes me smile to read this.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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5 posted 2001-06-09 06:52 PM


Noah,
Beautiful words and message.  Enjoyed this very much.

Poeminister

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