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Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

0 posted 2001-06-09 02:37 PM

Liquid silver of moonbeam, drifting down the pane,
Sparkling diamonds of spent droplet rain.
Beset with beauty, the sight was so grand
watching the glow creep up my hand
Kissing the palm, as only you used to do
softly and gently, it could only be true.

Gently I reached, touching the pane,
fingertips lightly, holding again.
Moonbeam kissing those fingertips,
as though saying, “I didn’t forget.”
The years had drifted so slowly by,
since you had laid there by my side.

Giving a small whisper of your name,
thoughts tumbling of nature’s game.
The wind softly rustled the leaves outside,
I knew I was hearing a tender goodbye.
Slowly the glow drifted from the pane,
once again it began to rain.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2001-06-09 02:43 PM

Oh Logan....now you just made me cry.....

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-06-09 02:45 PM

(sad sigh) This poem has a sad ending, but it is so very beautiful! (sigh) I know that feeling all too well where it feels like we're really in love when dreaming, but it disappears when the morning comes. (sigh) May this love truly come to you and may you hold her in the moonlight! (sigh) Very beautiful, dearest Logan! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

3 posted 2001-06-09 02:45 PM

Oh Logan, this brought tears to my eyes. Such emotion written with such a gentle quietness. A moment captured. I shall save this to read many many times, with a heartfelt sigh......

Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-06-09 02:52 PM

Liquid silver of moonbeam, drifting down the pane,
Sparkling diamonds of spent droplet rain.
Beset with beauty, the sight was so grand
watching the glow creep up my hand
Kissing the palm, as only you used to do
softly and gently, it could only be true.

Gently I reached, touching the pane,
fingertips lightly, holding again.
Moonbeam kissing those fingertips,
as though saying, “I didn’t forget.”
The years had drifted so slowly by,
since you had laid there by my side.
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this is absolutely stunning...
what a beautiful gift of inspire Logan..
this one goes in my treasure box

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

5 posted 2001-06-09 02:52 PM

Ahh, Paula, our posts hit almost together, I must have meant this one for you..Let the tears be of happy thoughts and memories of the one you lost...gentle smile

Noah, thank you so kindly, gentle one, for your thoughtful words, as they are precious to me...gentle smile

Tovi, gentle smile..thank you for reading and your gentle thoughts

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

6 posted 2001-06-09 02:55 PM

Janet Marie, you do me honor and humble with your thoughts, thank you so much...gentle smile

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-06-09 02:57 PM

Logan~
Such tender beauty is touched in this piece.

'Moonbeam kissing those fingertips,
as though saying, “I didn’t forget.”'

I so enjoy your gentle thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

8 posted 2001-06-09 04:16 PM

Ahh, Marge, thank you for your so kind words, if you enjoy my thoughts just a small percentage of how I have enjoyed all of yours, than you have made my day...gentle smile

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

9 posted 2001-06-10 12:40 PM

*soft gasps* Sweet One, what can I say here? With each one you write you surpass the last in beauty and emotion. I adore this as I am sure you know. Your spirit extends to great distances.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

10 posted 2001-06-10 12:45 PM

You weave such luscious words, tender and poignant with a touch of melancholy to end this piece.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

11 posted 2001-06-10 07:30 PM

I am so enjoying your poems tonight. You have a special, soft and flowing way of saying things.
Sandra

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

12 posted 2001-06-10 07:53 PM

Ahh, Temptress, most gentle one, as usual your words are so kind and appreciated to great lengths...at some point, maybe ten years or so, I will almost be as good as you..gentle smile

VAS, gentle smile, you are so kind with your thoughts and words, thank you so much for being here...gentle smile

Sandra, such a sweet thing to say to me, and is greatly appreciated, but not as much as I appreciate you being here and reading, as I hold your poems in great esteem...gentle smile

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

13 posted 2001-06-10 07:54 PM

Moonbeam kissing those fingertips,

another beautiful Logan Poem to kiss the air of night...thank you

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

14 posted 2001-06-10 08:05 PM

I loved this Logan

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