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Summer's Sunset (haiku)
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Summer's Sunset (haiku) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Summer Sunset Orange, red, and pink hues The begin a new nights slumber Summer’s own beauty TaraB [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 06-09-2001).] |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Ahhhhh, I was thinking just last night about the beautiful colors in the sunsets. You've captured it wonderfully.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rosepetal, Orange, red, and pink hues The begin a new nights slumber Summer’s own beauty The count should be 5-7-5 Orange, red and pink hues Begins a new nights slumber Summer's own beauty. Very good enjoyed. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 06-09-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful haikuing. Nicely done. PM |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Tovi - Thank you for stopping in.. I timed this poem pretty well huh?  Seymour - I know this is gonna sound cheesy before I say it.. but I knew that! lol. My proofreading needs work eh? Thank you for stopping in and pointing out my error I'm glad you enjoyed it.Poeminister - Thank you for the compliment I'm happy you liked it.TaraB |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is such a beautiful haiku! (smiles) I love the sunrises and sunsets of the summer, they are always so gorgeous and the bright colors always leave me with inspirations! (smiles) When the sky paints with art, one can feel the beauty of summer! (smiles) This is so beautiful Tara, you have such beautiful talent! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
sunset and sunrise in summertime are always so beautiful...they are my favourite topics and you captured the beauty very well. love it. Charisma |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Aww,...don't ya just love it? Nice. *Peace. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah - Your praise leaves me speechless. All I can say is thank you sincerely. I'm glad you liked it and I hope you continue to enjoy my other writings. Charisma - I love sunsets.. and they always seem to be more vivid in the summertime Thanks for stopping in.Spitfire - Glad you enjoyed  Thank you. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Now, you know that I just love this one! I love the mysterious beauty of a sunset, and you expressed it so well! Take care, Melissa~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yes, summer's lovely beauty, and you know what, we get to enjoy sunsets like this almost all year 'round, but spring and summer brings them in profound! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful colors!! All writing comes |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa - Thank you for stopping in! VAS - You're lucky I have to say sunsets are beautiful no matter what time of the year it is.. but summer seems to top them all Thanks for coming in.Lone Wolf - Thank you! |
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