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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-06-09 12:08 PM



Miranda Me

~*Marge Tindal*~
     
Miranda me - then set me free
do not use my verse against me
For though I have the right to remain silent
I poetically waiver my right to do so
I will defend - until breath's end
flow of ink from poet's pen

Should I, in time, serve for the crime
of passions-in-poetry penned
Know I lived the words I wrote
until eternity's end



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com                 





[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 06-09-2001).]

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 2001-06-09 12:12 PM


Marge your poetry is NEVER against the law!!! Wonderfully done!  
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2 posted 2001-06-09 12:34 PM


So right,  

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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3 posted 2001-06-09 12:39 PM


Margie girl, YOU little beauty, this is utterly divine and truly awesome. How much do I love this let me count the ways....

Outstanding and I love the whole thing, well done dearest sister of my heart

Take care
Love as always
Mushy
    

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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4 posted 2001-06-09 01:56 PM


PoetdeVine~
THANK YOU !
for the requested edit of my spelling error.
I get so aggravated at getting thrown out when I attempt an edit.
Guess I'll try to pay closer attention BEFORE posting, eh ?
I appreciate your reply.

Titia~
Thanks so much for the read.

MarshaLove~
Love to you too, sweet sister-of-my-heart.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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5 posted 2001-06-09 07:05 PM


Marge-

Should I, in time, serve for the crime
of passions-in-poetry penned
Know I lived the words I wrote
until eternity's end

Don't worry hon, I'll smuggle in a pen and paper in a cake.  Loved this!

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6 posted 2001-06-09 07:32 PM


Martie~
Sweet Sis ... you make my day ! !
I'll let you know what cell block they put me in !
LOVE YOU ~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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7 posted 2001-06-09 10:21 PM


Oh, Marge, if you go to a cell, can I please get one close by?  Don't know what caused this, but I love the verse!!  Hugs,  ME
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MotherEarth~
You on one side and Martie sneaking in with cake !
Wow .... what fun !
Thanks for enjoying this little judicial write !
I'm on a cause !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2001-06-10 12:55 PM


Dear Marge ,
Guilty as charged , none could convict ,'twas hung verdict .
Doc

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DrMoose~
In soft surround
truth in words abound
Scales of justice did the trick
NO WAY they could convict !
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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11 posted 2001-06-10 11:02 AM


                       "For though I have the right to remain silent
                              I poetically waiver my right to do so
                               I will defend - until breath's end
                                  flow of ink from poet's pen."

That's definitely you Marge and this is another example of that very thinking....wonderful write!

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12 posted 2001-06-10 01:03 PM


ETHome~
Thanks for your thoughts on this ...
It is the very heart of me that seeks to defend a cause.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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13 posted 2001-06-10 01:21 PM


Marge, gentle smile, you not only defend, why you take the offensive with boldness, gentleness, tenderness and always a wonderful read...so do not ever keep silent
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14 posted 2001-06-10 01:33 PM


I'm committing you to cellblock eleven
for this little slice of heaven...

cake, pen, paper and all...

LOVE IT!

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15 posted 2001-06-10 01:59 PM


intriguing writing, marge...delightful subject matter and uniquely penned...

enjoyed muchly


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16 posted 2001-06-10 02:09 PM


oh my Marge, would you count me in for another cell near you. So I can learn from the master herself, and don't worry I don't see the difference between right or wrong....I only recognize the beauty within.
and that's what you have for sure.

(((hugs)))
Charisma

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17 posted 2001-06-10 02:27 PM


Logan~
Thank you VERY much !
Those who know me really well ...
would laugh at the idea of me ever being silent !

Karilea~
I was waiting for you .......
Okay everyone ...
PARTY GOING ON IN CELLBLOCK ELEVEN !

Kaile~
Pleased to see you peeking in !
Sometimes I get off on a tangent that even catches me by surprise.

Charisma~
Pssssst !
Check out the party invitation !
You'd make a GOOD cellmate !
Thanks !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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