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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2001-06-09 11:59 AM




My heart soars without hearing your voice
I try holding back, but have no choice
You won my soul with a passion's flame
Because of you, I'll never be the same

I smile as you approve my verse
Deeper I sink into Cupid’s curse
And though you think my words a game
I continue to write them just the same.

Gently chiding you beckon me
ICQ messages set words free
Fingers that dare to say the word
The only one you've not yet heard

Silence speaks a world of feeling
Cursor blinks as my head is reeling
Thoughts and words I’ll not repent
This is love on the Internet

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2001-06-09 12:05 PM


DeVine One,
The write is excellent for that there can be no repent. Sy

brian madden
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2 posted 2001-06-09 12:08 PM


Silence speaks a world of feeling
Cursor blinks as my head is reeling
Thoughts and words I’ll not repent
This is love on the Internet


OH my, you have captured this strange feeling perfectly.

"Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-06-09 12:10 PM


yes, and as a recent post was entitled "it sucks!!!
Oh wait, not the poem "love on the internet" but LOVE on the internet !!!!

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 06-09-2001).]

Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2001-06-09 01:01 PM


I like it!!

Titia

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Tovi
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5 posted 2001-06-09 01:55 PM


Definitely a powerful thing.  

Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment.

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6 posted 2001-06-09 02:09 PM


Yep, there is!  
Charisma
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lost in blue pages
7 posted 2001-06-09 03:31 PM


you said it all....captured the feelings pretty good.

Charisma

Logan
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8 posted 2001-06-09 03:36 PM


If we all be truthful, we know the power of words on the internet. very well said, Poet...gentle smile
JLR
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9 posted 2001-06-09 03:40 PM


Sometimes, I swear that blinking cursor is screaming as I try to collect my thoughts before responding.  Have to agree with brian...captured perfectly.
doreen peri
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10 posted 2001-06-09 04:53 PM


lol!! i LOVE it!
missed it first go 'round

ain't love grand anywhere you find it?... taptaptap... there's PEOPLE in there! as our sweet sereneOne always says...

and as some very unknown poet once said,

"love is love is love is love is love
so love me baby!"

oh whoops... that would be me, wouldn't it?  


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