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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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multitudinous thoughts from every angle under dustsheets out of closets cupboards little dark corners snippets, snippets, everywhere “now that you’ve gone and done that” “go now and tell me how to do it again” “under the bluest sky his eyes held court” “thoughts of her tickled fancies as the breeze played her skirt” “she was the pretty woman but never heard the song” “before she went to dream, she softly called his name” “his days began with sun’s first light, and he recalled the good times” “her walk was directed at his want” “bubbles filled her, and he shimmered in her glow” all these lonely beginnings with no middle and an end never in sight |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
The never ending snippets of phrase that so often run through the poets head would seem so silly and senseless to those without the gift. You found a wonderful way to pile some of them together to share with all that carry the gift...or sometimes curse! Thank you for sharing, with each phrase my heart spoke a song. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Karilea! Very lovely! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Too often it is true good write. *L* |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sunshine, This was wonderful and I learned a new word (snippets) never heard that one before, great work here, enjoyed. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, my, each phrase seems to be the beginning or the end of a wonderful tale...I love the one about the breeze playing her skirt, and the one...nope, I love 'em all and I want to hear the rest of the story for each one!!! Either that, or I want to try writing the rest of the story. These would be so good to put in the challenge spot, but then they are also so much yours. they fill my head with wondering and my spirit with excitement. |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I think we all have these bit and pieces lying around..you did a great job of tying a lovely poetic ribbon on them.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ What a lovely patchwork quilt of thoughts ! You amaze me, seamingpoetess ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Bravo. Beautiful way of expressing those cantles of thought scattered about the mind. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-09-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yes, inspirations and thoughts are infinite, they are found in every corner and under every ocean and in every cloud of the sky. (smiles) Some inspirations may only be fragments of a masterpiece, but they all fit together and bring out the magic of every place and wonder everywhere! (sigh) Beautiful poem, sweet Sunshine! You have sucha beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Karilea, wonderful poem for all the words and phrases we abandon our search for inspiration. "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SUNSHINE, I read your poem twice already and so finally here I am on read number three just to let ya know I really enjoyed this... Hugs2UsweetPoetFriend *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 07-09-2001).] |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
my brain can qualify as SnippetLand!....filled with threads waiting to be woven into a tapestry of rhyme....sometimes they wait a very long time  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
thoughtful |
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