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Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2001-06-08 09:44 PM

you may be tiny
in the middle of a crowd
but one will see you

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 06-08-2001).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-06-08 10:03 PM

beautifully said..*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

2 posted 2001-06-08 11:13 PM

This is just beautiful. Brought a smile. I often feel just that way.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-06-09 02:51 AM

beautifully expressed.

Charisma

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-06-09 09:30 AM

amid the grandeur
of all the peacocks standing
one will see the white

Tovi, I love this!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-06-09 09:38 AM

Titia,
Lovely, enjoyed the read.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-06-09 11:08 AM

Lovely, lovely, lovely....a grand treatment of your 'subject'

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

7 posted 2001-06-09 01:45 PM

Beautifully done, Titia..

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-06-09 02:53 PM

Titia~
Such a lovely presentation !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-06-09 03:03 PM

This is so insightful and the picture is glorious!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2001-06-09 03:57 PM

Within these great flocks
One holds a special sweet song
For a friend like you

WOW!!! BRAVO!!! This is a senryu everyone should read, it has such a small but powerfully important message! There are many who will never look up to you in a crowd, but you are never alone, one is listening and watching you. (smiles) Everyone has a friend, just as you are a beautiful friend to me. (smiles) Beautiful poem, sweet Titia, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

11 posted 2001-06-09 04:03 PM

The beauty and soul of just the one, will always stand out. very well done Titia...gentle smile

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

12 posted 2001-06-09 08:17 PM

This is perfection! I ADORE THIS...great thought and the graphic is the perfect visual!

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

13 posted 2001-06-09 08:26 PM

Thanks a lot, I'm happy when you're happy

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

14 posted 2001-06-09 08:37 PM

i noticed your poem among others...sheepish grin

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