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PiXiEpUnKeR
Junior Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 49
IL, USA

0 posted 2001-06-08 07:16 PM


Sometimes I feel happiness
outside in the air
free-falling from the world
bothered by no one

Sometimes I feel anger
want to scream, want to kick
"those stupid boys"
(they can't understand me)

Sometimes I feel butterflies
is it love?
I can't call it love, until I know it's love
I don't want to come out of it

Sometimes I feel sickness
like a bat to the stomach
I lay there gripping where it hurts
"why me? why me?"

Sometimes I feel the space
the distance between two crossed hearts
I try to mend them back together
tears keep them apart,
a slipping friction moving them

Sometimes I feel bliss
thinking of your face, your kiss
the music, the freedom!
ah, sometimes I feel such bliss

Sometimes I miss myself
I travel so far into the other world
floating, and dreaming
please pull me back!

Sometimes I feel you
I feel our touch, our love
I grip it and hold it tight
dont make me let go...

Sometimes I feel words
they hurt, they sting
or they calm, and love
they circle around like a jumbled tornado

Sometimes I feel pain
"damn", I say
"not this again"
(but it still remembers to haunt me)

Sometimes I feel life!
I feel the birds swooping down near me
I feel birth! I feel a new heartbeating!
I take it all in,
and push out whatever else I feel




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Watersign6
Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823
Hurricane,WV
1 posted 2001-06-08 07:23 PM


hi Pixiepunker! welcome to passions,this is the first one of yours i have read but i will
be looking for more of yours and i like this one because it is relatable and an enjoyable
read,you have touched on many feeling with it
and done it so well,keep writing  

angelswing
Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
2 posted 2001-06-08 07:28 PM


.... I'm speachless, this is amazing, this is one of the best poems i have ever read, the way the paregraphs flow, yet it still always keeps meaning and the true deep feeling that it is expressing . I know a lot of what you say in your poem well enouth myself, I am glad you were able to write it down and share it, because I never ever managed to write down more than small bits of it . I so emphasise with what your saying, thanks for making me feel much better, I love a good read . Remember if you ever need someone to talk to or a cyber shoulder to cry on, You can always e-mail me.
L.of.L. Tommy .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

PiXiEpUnKeR
Junior Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 49
IL, USA
3 posted 2001-06-08 07:31 PM


I never knew my words could make someone say such nice things! Thank you SO much for your replies. You know what? To tell a secret, this poem took me all of 10 minutes to write... it all just flowed out... I was very impressed afterwards though! Thank you so much for your kind words!  ~Dri
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