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Open Poetry #14

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Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

0 posted 2001-06-08 07:08 PM

He opened my heart
like a cherished gift
Slowly and carefully
unwrapping delicate layers of
light emotion
and with tender persuasion
he coaxed my very depths,
the voice so long unused,
into his hands
lovingly exploring
every part of me
and I danced in beauty
Gentle shyness turning to
sparkling confidence
as my soul gazed up at him
and knew love
Like know other
I knew love

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

1 posted 2001-06-08 07:15 PM

Another brilliant poem from you Tovi, can you by any chance tell me your secret, your style has a hell of a lot going for it, and this is yet another one of your poems which I have enjoyed reading, Many thanks .
L.of.L. Tommy .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-06-08 07:16 PM

Gentle write of love. Beautifully done.

Charisma

Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

3 posted 2001-06-08 07:19 PM

angelswing, thank you so much. Every now and then something good slips out.

I think you've made my day!

Charisma - Thank you!

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