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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast

0 posted 2001-06-08 03:45 PM




Another day
without you
another night
alone
another tear
to mark the
tomb that I
call my home
Another dream
that's not come
true because
you are not
here
Another wish
for me to make
again on the
new year...

~Tier
6/01

© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2001-06-08 03:49 PM


Hoping that wish will come true for you...James
Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2001-06-08 03:53 PM



you do indeed write so well... so nice to see your works again my friend

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2001-06-08 04:09 PM


Very sad and melancholy writing. I like the way you let your feelings out, it helps to deal with the hurt!
Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
4 posted 2001-06-08 04:56 PM


Thank you, James, I appreciate your that! *smiles*

The feeling is mutual, dear Captain, always...

Thank you, Ethome, one can only hope...

*smiles*

~Tier

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 06-08-2001).]

Passions Voice
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since 2000-10-23
Posts 291
Michigan
5 posted 2001-06-08 07:45 PM


Wonderful Tiersdin, I find myself thinking of someone special that I wish was with me right now.

passion is life. . . ~Diana


Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25
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Hurricane,WV
6 posted 2001-06-08 08:12 PM


i love it  
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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7 posted 2001-06-08 08:15 PM


This is so heartreding, I don't know, really got to me...this evening.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Logan
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since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
8 posted 2001-06-08 10:17 PM


Ahh, Tier, the melancholy of this, and just think of all those that care, really care...gentle smile
Sven
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9 posted 2001-06-09 11:35 AM


Tier, this just reaches out and touches the heart. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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