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Loving Senryus |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
~*~ In uncommon, found I have looked for you, around You, have held the key ~*~ Found, in your light Around your soul, I shall dance In your key of love ~*~ Lightful tunes delight In your tenor I find night Enchanting in trance ~*~ Now, come, bring me home In me, find your forever In our moor of love ~*~ [This message has been edited by Decaflame (edited 06-08-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ohhhhhhh...this is SO pretty!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Decaflame--So very beautiful!! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very sensual..interesting play between an arabic tone of sorts and images from other places... an enjoyable read and one which is seductive |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I am baritone I sing in a lower key as I sing of thee |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Love these, especially the second one. Beautifully penned. PM |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful skills displayed here Decaflame! Very romantic! "Now, come, bring me home In me, find your forever In our moor of love." |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Someone's in love. |
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