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Open Poetry #14

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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-06-08 01:23 PM

~*~

only in valleys

~*~

do my echoes haunt to find

~*~

my shadows dwelling

~*~

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2001-06-08 01:28 PM

This is lovely...I could hear the echo falling

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-06-08 01:34 PM

Ok, this is great~!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
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ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2001-06-08 01:35 PM

Decaflame I like the many ways this can lead the reader's mind! Fab stuff!

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-06-08 02:04 PM

(chuckling) Would you say...that echo's search for your shadow is only in the valley..or would it be better served to search in other places as well?

Love the way this sounds...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-06-08 02:16 PM

~*~

the sheer walls surround

~*~

each wall calling the other

~*~

within the echoes

~*~

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-06-08 02:28 PM

Resounding, hauntful
harsh echoes fill my umbers
in pensive valleys

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

7 posted 2001-06-12 09:19 AM

Thank you all for responding so...poetically!

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