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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-06-08 01:11 PM



Words
Wedded to meaning
Lie like virgins on wedding night
Across the pristine sheets
Waiting to be caressed
By eyes and mind,
As they give themselves
To this new lover.

Exposed,
In half dressed ideas,
They are still a mystery
one never tires
Of trying to coax
answers from.

Secrets
Held closely in between
The saying and the meaning,
Half slips which keep
the light from shining
through thin material,
are the last to be discarded
and left lying in piles
for laundering or
re-wearing

Quickly
They become familiar
And for granted they
Turn their charms on new
Eyes and minds…
Seducing them as
They did me

© Copyright 2001 Cpat Hair - All Rights Reserved
Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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1 posted 2001-06-08 01:34 PM


Clever play on words and meaning. An excellent read, Captain...

*smiles*

~Tier

Paula Finn
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missouri
2 posted 2001-06-08 01:35 PM


Oh yes....how we read different meanings into these words of ours...nicely written
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-06-08 01:36 PM


very nicely written.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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4 posted 2001-06-08 01:37 PM


I have to agree with the others! Words are taken so many different ways depending on their arrangement and application...well done!
Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

5 posted 2001-06-08 01:38 PM


every nuance, every innuendo, every soft play of worded delight is amusing in its shift, the weight of which is silk to skin...

a reader's delight....

Martie
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6 posted 2001-06-08 01:42 PM


Oh Cpat, I liked this!  Well done!
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