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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-06-08 10:38 AM



sought after
fame is illusive
search no more

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-08 10:43 AM


yep,when your 15 min. is up, it's up


sorry, I just couldn't resist, here you've made a profound statement and I've commented with humor, hope you're not offended.

I'm afraid I saw a comic strip yesterday about one's 15 min. of fame.  It was a rather cynical one so it had me primed for this kind of response.

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2 posted 2001-06-08 10:47 AM


And in ourselves we must find that which is to us, important. What the world then thinks or recognizes is merely a reflection of the state they exist in.

Love this form and the way so much is said with so little....


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3 posted 2001-06-08 10:52 AM


I guess if it's going to come to a person it will in time. Being comfortable with ourselves is the kind of destination we should be seeking. If the fame comes then so be it!   great write!
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4 posted 2001-06-08 10:58 AM


~*~

fame, never to be
found in any other's eyes
but only in yours

~*~

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5 posted 2001-06-08 11:00 AM


VAS ~ How could I ever be upset with you?  I will just get even

CH ~ Thank you, and you are correct my new friend.

ethome ~ Many thanks my friend.  Yes, life, maturity, and comfort are not destinations.  Rather, they are journeys.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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6 posted 2001-06-08 12:17 PM


Lady ~ You are probably right, doggone it

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7 posted 2001-06-08 01:45 PM


famously
we two get along
famous friends

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8 posted 2001-06-08 01:49 PM


SEA ~ If I were to be a famous friend, what more could I ask?  Beautiful Senryu  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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9 posted 2001-06-08 01:54 PM


Fame is a bewitch
She gives nought but illusion
artificial light

Nicely done.

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10 posted 2001-06-08 01:55 PM


Lovey piece of verse!!
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11 posted 2001-06-08 02:01 PM


Wisdom in verse..
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12 posted 2001-06-08 02:08 PM


PM ~
bewitching
fame entrances us
illusion

Thanks for the fine compliment, Bard, er , ah, Brad

Martie ~ A wise reply, no doubt  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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