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sans38
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0 posted 2001-06-08 09:26 AM


True beauty is a light in the heart,
and yours shines like a welcoming beacon
that drew me to you from the start.
No matter what, you're always there for me...
in your words AND in your deeds.
You are a sweet scent in life's potpourri...
and bring sunshine to each life that you touch.
You're a big part of all that's good in my life...
for that I thank you very very much!




[This message has been edited by sans38 (edited 06-08-2001).]

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Tovi
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1 posted 2001-06-08 10:34 AM


Some people just sparkle with it, don't they?
VAS
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2 posted 2001-06-08 10:46 AM


You are a sweet scent in life's potpourri...

Your poem is beautiful but the line above is priceless!  OOooh, I like it!  Also, this would be a great one to be as a response to PDV's Friends' challenge.

sans38
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3 posted 2001-06-08 10:51 AM


Thank you so much! I've posted three friendship poems today in honor of PDV's Friends' challenge...I thought I was supposed to put them here : ) Where was I supposed to put them?
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4 posted 2001-06-09 07:41 PM


well, I'm glad that you put this one here!!!  

great job. . . nothing more beautiful than a friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

sans38
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5 posted 2001-06-09 09:02 PM


Thanks Sven : ) glad you enjoyed it!
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