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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-06-08 08:41 AM


Evening and another trip
Around the lake…
Old Jeep rattles on gravel
And  dust flies through
Open windows…
As in slow creeping fashion
I try and slip past the
Heat of day and into night.

Deer usually there somewhere
Greet headlights with wide eyed stares
That bounce with each bump in the
Rutted road from here to nowhere

Owls… wisdom not their nature
Sit long in front of me
Till I step on the brake
And slow even more to allow them
In comical imitation of  rabbit
To hop out of the way…

Occasional fox or coyote
Slink hurriedly away from the noise
And smell of my old oil burner
As he grumbles up inclines
And shudders down again

Evening and another trip
Around the lake and back to childhood
When evening stars and full moon
Would outline swaying trees
And every shadow held in its midst
The things you feared….

Now… darkness folds the landscape
Onto itself and two thin beams try to
Lead me home…
With windows down and dust
Coating the inside of my nose
So that I can't smell the memories
Of being alone…


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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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1 posted 2001-06-08 08:46 AM


Wonderful word images here ...took me back a few years...well done!
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-06-08 08:47 AM


I have ridden in that vehicle....

Applauding!

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