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All My Tomorrows
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All My Tomorrows |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
When Summer’s heat Drove us outside Gasping for cool air Like fish thrown on shore, We shared cold drinks While sitting on the porch Watching moonlight’s Dappled dance under the trees Listening to cicadas sing. And talking quietly Of tomorrows. Fall’s crisp air made us wrap In woolen sweaters to ward Off the chill that crept like A sly fox into our bones As we sat on the porch Watching the bare bodies Of trees sway seductively to The music of a northern breeze And talked about yesterdays. Winter’s cold exhaled From far northern climes, And we banked fires against Frigid nights filled with empty stars, Held hands under blankets Of cloudy down, as we spoke Of forever and Spring… Watching angels of snow Leave heavens loft … I want all my tomorrows And all my yesterdays To be yours. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is so beautifully romantic....a real poet's view of the seasons through the eyes of love! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The imagery here is amazing....your metaphors leave one hungry....for more.... excellent! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* what a romantic piece....so peaceable and with tender love....thank you for sharing my fiend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Charisma... how did you know I was a fiend?? I thought I had hidden that part of myself quite well..( chuckling) Sorry... couldn't resist picking at you... thank you for the comment and glad you enjoyed. |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
What a beautiful expression of love! Very Very nice!!!! |
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