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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2001-06-08 07:51 AM


Spring morning breeze chills,
Playing slow songs on branches,
Breaking sun warms all.

Cloudy skies drift west,
Intertwines friendly dances
Off the morning stage.

Clear light blue canvas,
Rainless the only chances,
Winds spins now warmer.

Gloom



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ethome
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1 posted 2001-06-08 08:06 AM


Beautiful description of a June morning using this style!  Well written, captivating!
Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2001-06-08 08:08 AM


enjoyed both the description and the style... look forward to more!
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-06-08 08:21 PM


this is excellent in form and detail.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2001-06-08 11:15 PM



unusually soft for you..very nice, PG

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Professor Gloom
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5 posted 2001-06-09 07:18 AM


Thank you, ethome,
Seems the shorter forms suit me,
Linking them gives greater expression.

Thank you, Cpat Hair,
I am pleased you enjoyed.

Thank you, Irish Rose,
I am glad you liked it.

Thank you, Nakdthoughts,
Blame it on the form
and a warm late spring morning.

Gloom

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