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0 posted 2001-06-08 07:10 AM



Your Gift

How do I find the words
To express what my heart feels
The gift you generously give
Is one I never wanted again
One I never thought I’d have
My heart was so shattered
Frozen with so much pain
You managed to melt the ice
Now warmth and light once again
Flows through my awakened heart
How do I say thank you
For the wondrous gift of love
For saving me from myself
From the bottom of my heart…

I love you.

TaraB

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1 posted 2001-06-08 07:36 AM


How do I find the words
To express what my heart feels


....you just did, and beautifully so, such
tender writing, it shines like pure love
should~

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2 posted 2001-06-08 08:12 AM


Butterflies - Thank you But these words don't even begin to describe what I want to say. I'm glad you like it  
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