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azblond
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The Steamy Desert

0 posted 2001-06-08 01:25 AM




No judgement, just words
Tumbling from my soul
I need to tell you simply
Of the hurt you let me know

Friends forever we were supposed to be
And for 20 years it was true
Why is it I awoke one day
And realized I’d lost you?

What happened to the promises
That no one would ever part
Two special friend like we were
Bound together by the heart

We shared so many secrets
So much heartache, occasional lies
Hell Saym, in the past
We even shared a few of our guys!

How did it come to pass
That one day we would not be
The very Best of Friends
Always Shellie and Saymme

What happened to our Friendship
Did I do something wrong?
You were always my backbone
And I taught you to be strong

Your family told me the reason
A marriage you think is right
But why’d he make you give up
All your strength and fight?

I’d never ask you to leave him
But I’d be your shelter if you had to go
Except you won’t return my phone calls
So how will I let you know?

I miss you so very much
And the years are passing by
What ever happened to our promise
Never apart because of a guy

That doesn’t matter now
I just need you to know
You’re like my sun in the dark
I need you to help me grow

I miss you dearest friend
I’m lonely without you near
Please don’t hang up again
Without you I have fear

I need to know you are okay
That your fire still burns hot
Please tell me you miss me too
And our past is not forgot

Your family too is worried
They even came to me
Please pick up the phone and answer
Are you there Saymme?

I will forever keep on trying
Somehow to get through
Don’t worry, my anger is over
I just miss and love you.

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

© Copyright 2001 MiChelle Van Vleet - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-08 01:34 AM


(tears fall down my cheeks) Such sadness and anxiety fill these words of pure honestry and heart! (big hugggsssss) My heart cries out to you seeing you feel this way, for I know how it must feel when you can't help but worry if the other person is alright and if they think about you just the way you do, and such worry and sorrow evolves. (sad sigh) I hope you find him again real soon, and if you can't stay together, I hope you stay as true friends to each other to share memories together and fuel each others souls with confidence and hope! (big hugggssss) I pray with all my heart these worries end soon and you feel much better! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2001-06-08 06:20 AM


Very sad and open poem...feelings well expressed!
Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2001-06-08 07:51 AM


very sad story..and I hope that all the ones who are lost...find a way back
sans38
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since 2001-03-03
Posts 117
Westland, Michigan
4 posted 2001-06-08 08:00 AM


This brought tears to my eyes. Never lose hope ok?
azblond
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The Steamy Desert
5 posted 2001-06-08 09:38 AM


Thank you all for your support on this one...as you can tell the subject is very close to me heart.

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

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