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Just a Little |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert 
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Just a little tighter Hold me please Just a little longer Listening to the breeze Just a little teardrop Falling from my eye Just a little dream Ending with a sigh Just a little sadder I became today Just a little wiser About life’s mysterious way Just a little older Than I was before Just a little closer To loneliness than before Just a little baby Who now won’t be born Just a little lifetime Left for me to mourn. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh gosh, this poem is so heartbreaking and bleeds with such sorrow from your broken heart! (big hugggsssss) My heart cries out to you and can only pray that very soon true love finds your heart to remain forever and you find yourself speed away from loneliness and get closer to utopia everyday! (sad sigh) So very sad but well-written, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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zzz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 55 |
ahh so sad i read through and was caughtof guard with the last verse tears almost fell i liked it a lot have been reading alot of you lately you are very varied bye for now zzzzzzzzz |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very well told..the sadness creeps through the last ines to hold you... |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Thank you for the comments...a sad subject from days long past. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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