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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-06-07 11:50 PM












In Friendship's Flower
~*Marge Tindal*~

Upon the avenue of friend
I found a blossom opening
And like your friendship
it became more beautiful
as each petal paused to flower
Just as I've found the openings in you
explaining in crystal pure voice
the treasured friendship of our choice






© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Logan
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1 posted 2001-06-07 11:54 PM


Ahhh, Marge, you do say the sweetest offerings...gentle smile
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2 posted 2001-06-07 11:57 PM


BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a beautiful and sweet friendship poem! You are just too sweet and your heart is indeed the friendship flower this sweet cherub holds true. (sigh) I too have a special flower for you that declares my friendship with you, lathered in sweet honey and love. (smiles) May I and everyone here be the butterflies that drink from this sweet friendship flower of your heart! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-06-08 12:23 PM


Delightful poem, Marge!!!

(But that's about the WORST HTML I've ever seen.   )

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4 posted 2001-06-08 12:48 PM


What inspired joy it must be to call you a friend!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

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5 posted 2001-06-08 01:20 AM


Logan~
I do so appreciate your replies.
Thank you for being so kind.

Noah~
I thank you.
My heart spills over with the love of many friends.

Ron~
Thank you for teaching me all I know.

AZBlond~
What a sweet thing for you to say.
Thanks so much.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

ethome
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6 posted 2001-06-08 06:13 AM


This is a joy to read Marge!....as usual I might add.  I love the end..

                       "Just as I've found the openings in you
                           explaining in crystal pure voice
                        the treasured friendship of our choice"

Oh that's a beautiful choice of words!

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7 posted 2001-06-08 07:40 AM


oh Marge you beautiful friend, this one is soooooo adorable....and so sweet.

((hugs))
Charisma

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8 posted 2001-06-08 07:47 AM


very nice.. enjoyed this one!
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9 posted 2001-06-08 07:53 AM


WOWZA! this is truely stunning and i love it
your just incredible my poet friend  

sans38
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10 posted 2001-06-08 07:57 AM


Simply beautiful!
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11 posted 2001-06-08 08:44 AM


Dear little angel Marge,
One of your fellow poet-sisters (charisma)
was so kind enuf to share this particular poem with me, that must've just flowed straight from the heart!
LOVED it!
Many blessings!
Thanx

Martie
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12 posted 2001-06-08 11:21 AM


Marge--In the garden of my heart...you bloom!
Soaringeagle
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13 posted 2001-06-08 04:57 PM


OH DEAR MAIDEN
THIS ONE IS INCREDIBLE
AND FOR SURE A KEEPER

YOUR WORDS ARE A SWEET AS
A GENTLE BREEZE CARESSING
A HIDDEN GLEN......

           LOVYA<>

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14 posted 2001-06-08 09:21 PM


ETHome~
Thank you.
It's a beautiful choice of friendship too !

Charisma~
Thank you, kind and loving lady !
*Hugs* to you, also !

CPatHair~
Thank you for letting me know.

KelliKay~
Thanks so much !

Sandra~
I do appreciate seeing your reply.
Glad to know you're here.

Shawana~
Awwww !
Thank you for letting me know that my Charisma sent you here.
Welcome to Passions and thank you so much for enjoying this.

Martie~
My sweet Sis ... you tend your garden well.
I love ya'

SoaringEagle~
My love, I caress you with a smile.
I love you.

*Hugs to all~
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Cerenity
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15 posted 2001-06-08 10:14 PM


Hi Marge,

This is so wonderful, and what a perfect way to display it,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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16 posted 2001-06-08 11:10 PM


"As each petal paused to flower"  Oh that's beautiful!   *Applauds*
Daniel J D
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17 posted 2001-06-08 11:37 PM


Marge,
Your work is so precious, sorry for not having been around to enjoy such beauty. Always love your work.

Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2001-06-09 12:22 PM


Cerenity~
Thank you so much, hon.

Tovi~
Thanks for the gentle applause ... music to my ears.

JD~
Important only that you are here now !
Thank you so much.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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19 posted 2001-06-09 12:42 PM


This is precious, Marge!
Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2001-06-09 12:52 PM


Denise~
Thanks for burning the midnight oil with me, sweet lady !
Glad you enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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21 posted 2001-06-09 02:14 AM


Ah this was so sweet, I was waiting my turn but for one petal, I love this one it warms my heart!

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~

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22 posted 2001-06-09 05:01 PM


Mysteria~
'Petals' of you touch my heart.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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23 posted 2001-06-10 12:29 PM


Marge.  This is beautiful  I have just recently developed a friendship with a woman who I truly adore.  I instantly thought of her when I read this poem.  You've brought tears to my eyes and a smile to my heart.  Thank you for sharing.

[This message has been edited by Lisann (edited 06-10-2001).]

Marge Tindal
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24 posted 2001-06-10 09:05 AM


Lisann~
Sharing in friendship is such a garden of delight.
May your friendship blossom with each new moment shared.
Thank you for letting me know you were touched by these thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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25 posted 2001-06-10 12:07 PM



Oh Margie, this is just so precious, I love it! Into my library this goes    I think that I'll share this with a few of my close friends, thank you for sharing it with us!  

Take care,
Melissa~

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26 posted 2001-06-10 01:16 PM


Melissa~
I'm so pleased you made your way to the garden~
A petal has paused with your name written upon it.
I thank YOU for your friendship.
Glad to know you wish to share ...
That's what friendship is all about !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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27 posted 2001-06-10 07:06 PM




Oh.......Marge .....just lovely
Your poem is a petal of beauty ........
as good friendship surely is........

and the way u represented it is just beautiful.......I wish I'd learn that  

**********************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

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28 posted 2001-06-11 12:26 PM


EnchantedMelody~
Thank you sooooooo much for enjoying this.
The poem was a heartfelt piece-of-cake ...
The format was a little more difficult
and a new attempt for me to learn some new HTML formatting ...
I didn't quite get it right for the closing of the code,
but Ron helped straighten it out for me.
Goodness knows I appreciated his help.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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29 posted 2001-06-11 05:24 AM


Marge,
This is most wonderful offering from you... your heart shines with this...

Applause..

regards,
sudhir

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30 posted 2001-06-11 11:19 PM


Margie girl, oh dearest sister of my heart, this is utterly utterly brilliant, we all love you Margie girl. (I on the other hand don't just love you, I adore you!) Always have done dearest, and always will. HE fills the spaces of many hearts with a Margie girl shaped angel, thank you for always saying the right thing. And for being there sitting in my heart when I need you, HUG's and much love, winging your way

Take care
love as always
Mushy
    

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Marge Tindal
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31 posted 2001-06-12 12:04 PM


Sudhir~
Thank you, my sweet friend.

MarshaLove~
You sweetheart,you !
I love you, MarshaGal.
You not just a petal - you're an entire bouquet in my heart.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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