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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2001-06-07 08:45 PM


A Moment

Look, see
Touch, feel
Listen, hear
Smile, no tear
Anger, no friend
Pain, need to heal
Speak, angels will kneel
Sense, love conquers all
Forgive, peace no more imagined
Search, no more for a moment
The mirror is looking at you.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2001 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
Watersign6
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1 posted 2001-06-07 08:47 PM


this is Amazing and i enjoyed it so  
SEA
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2 posted 2001-06-07 08:54 PM


DJD~   Wonderful to see you posting again..... made me smile to see your name....fantastic write   hope you post more   ~SEA
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-06-07 09:01 PM


Good to see you again, Daniel, I love that last line  

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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4 posted 2001-06-08 01:37 AM


Did I ever mention you write beautifully? This speaks truthfully of that fact.   I love it.

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5 posted 2001-06-08 01:46 AM


(smiles) A moment can indeed reveal so much, and teach so much as well. One sad tear can immediately become a trinket of hope should one feel the love reflect within the smooth eye of the tear! (smiles) Savor every moment and make it gold! I love the form and voice of this poem of beauty! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Daniel J D
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6 posted 2001-06-08 11:35 PM


Watersign, Mistletoe, Irish Rose, Temptress, and SEA it is good to be back amongst my dear friends at Passions. Been busy lately, and I do apologise for not have been in touch. Bless you all.
Charisma
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7 posted 2001-06-09 03:40 AM


yeah the mirror said it all....  
.

((hugs))
Charisma

Tovi
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8 posted 2001-06-09 03:44 AM


So many people miss moments.  Your message and presentation is perfect.  
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9 posted 2001-06-10 10:22 AM


enjoy
Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2001-06-10 01:28 PM


JD~
Lovely reflections !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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