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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2001-06-07 08:20 PM

There’s a door left unopened
And the heart can heal if we believe
Sailing out across the ocean is
My lifetime of you and me
At the mercy of the sea
Tossed in the storm
Torn, & tangled in the sails of yesterday
In a sinking soul of dreams
In the harbor of my eyes
Shines the star I follow with loyalty
A moment we all must
Come to, casting tears to fate,
And faith of loving again
In the rain I feel your name
In the wind I see your face
Of the night I call your name
When I knew the moon, it’s
Pale eloquence, I bathed in the pearl sheen
Of the sheets but now unto my canvas
I paint the nights of you
In a chambered heart tasting
The bittersweet orchid
Smell of your skin
Where the scattered flowers
Of winters past now grow in silence
I await my journey to your arms
Upon this earth time does move slow
And the mountains still wait
Inquietude of the moment
Among the stars my soul, free

I n s p i r e d

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 06-07-2001).]

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

1 posted 2001-06-07 08:25 PM

let me be the first to say WOWZA!!! and I love this it is Great!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-06-07 08:28 PM

This is indeed poetry in motion dear lady. Beautiful......just beautiful. *s* I have missed your words dear friend. Hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-06-07 09:06 PM

inspiring indeed. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-06-08 12:17 PM

There’s a door left unopened
And the heart can heal if we believe
Sailing out across the ocean is
My lifetime of you and me
=============================
In the rain I feel your name
In the wind I see your face
Of the night I call your name
When I knew the moon, it’s
Pale eloquence, I bathed in the pearl sheen
Of the sheets but now unto my canvas
I paint the nights of you
In a chambered heart tasting
The bittersweet orchid
Smell of your skin
Where the scattered flowers
Of winters past now grow in silence
I await my journey to your arms
Upon this earth time does move slow
And the mountains still wait
Inquietude of the moment
Among the stars my soul, free
inspired
====================

silent awe ... and totally poetically sated

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-06-08 12:38 PM

"In the harbor of my eyes
Shines the star I follow with loyalty"

Beautiful writing...

PM

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

6 posted 2001-06-08 12:42 PM

Of winters past now grow in silence
I await my journey to your arms
************************************
Sigh...Beautiful...simply beautiful!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2001-06-08 06:51 AM

                                     "When I knew the moon, it’s
                              Pale eloquence, I bathed in the pearl sheen
                               Of the sheets but now unto my canvas
                                     I paint the nights of you
                                   In a chambered heart tasting
                                     The bittersweet orchid
                                       Smell of your skin
                                   Where the scattered flowers
                                Of winters past now grow in silence
                                  I await my journey to your arms
                                Upon this earth time does move slow
                                   And the mountains still wait
                                    Inquietude of the moment
                                  Among the stars my soul, free"

That's beautiful poetry!    I swam in this ocean of feeling!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2001-06-08 07:57 AM

very nice imagery and flow... good work here!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-06-08 08:23 PM

stunning imagery and may I say that when a door remains open it leads to joy!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

10 posted 2001-06-08 08:44 PM

Outstanding imagery, and so very gentle.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2001-06-08 09:15 PM

This was incredible, Lauren. Great write!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2001-06-09 05:56 PM

Liked this....James

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

13 posted 2001-06-10 12:25 PM

Thanks so much for all the kind replies and for reading, I appreciate you all much...

Lauren~

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

14 posted 2001-06-13 12:30 PM

I love this Lauren. I remember you showing this to me as an unfinished poem. You've done well in the completion, sweet one. (((hugs)))

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

15 posted 2001-06-13 09:44 PM

Michael~

Thanks so much for your input....

and for reading always...

Lauren~

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

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