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There Once Was...
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There Once Was... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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There once was a girl who kept trying... To become what her heart was denying... She was lost in his dream, while inside her heart screamed... When alone, she would find herself crying... She'd always been good to her mother... And kind to her sisters and brother... Two men in her life... Both took her to wife, and for granted...her spirit they smothered... The years rolled along, she got older... The need in her soul became bolder... She found she could write, there was many a night... When she simply wrote what her heart told her... The words were a magical potion... They set a new life into motion... She lived in their home, but her gypsy soul roamed... On the net, with determined devotion... She knew it was out there...she'd find it... Her heart was the culprit behind it... And if one lonely day, love should happen her way... Her heart would jump in, never mind it... And that's where the story continues... There's a choice of two plates, and two menus... On the one...nothing there... On the other...Fate's fare... Hard to choose between opposite venues... This story, as yet, has no ending... And today is another beginning... Closer look...one can see... Love has set two hearts free... While the future awaits, and is pending... The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Wonderful. This is the best thing I've read all day. It makes me smile and laugh. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
To live on other planes through the stroke fo a keyboard, is quite satisfying to the soul looking for release...gentle smile |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Wonderful piece Sunny! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I KNOW this is the best thing I've read all day, Sunny, this is me! ha ha and lots of women I would imagine. I love it from beginning to end. Thank you for sharing this me, I needed it. Kathleen Blake |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is such an easy and enjoyable read. Thanks, Titia  A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Bravo!! I loved it. I too felt almost as if you were writing about me...more please! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
...Effigy... Yes....you will find smiles and tears in this experience.....as in life!! Thank you!! ...Logan... Sometimes the only way to release the chains on the door is through the mind!! Thank you!! ...Brad... Glad you liked this one, and can understand the woman's side of it!! Thank you!! ...Irish Rose... Yes, you are right...this is really for us girls, and yes, I know of several who could be the subject in this one!! Thank you!! ...Titia... It kind of fell out of my fingers, to my muse's delight...nice 'n easy... Thank you!! ...azblond... I may have been, my friend, or it may have been for all of us ladies......Thank you!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
2 thumbsup oh yeah!!!  |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
there was many a night... When she simply wrote what her heart told her"" oh how I agree, always write what your heart speaks...I love this from you...very beautiful my friend...  Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful poem! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Those two hearts have to connect!......It just takes time.........Lovely write and a wonderful story! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, is it me, or is this a perfect lymeric style? Well thats how it flowed when I read it, anyway. Great poem, and such a true message. Thats us, alright. And what can you do? Keep on writing, and keep the open heart, and no other choices, as I see it. Love this. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) What a beautiful feeling indeed, where the sun finally shines on ones soul to feel the magic of loves voice sing in ones heart! (smiles) I love the rhyme scheme in this poem, it's like seven limericks connected together! (smiles) I too pray for her love to last a lifetime and may this girl that was once lost be happy ever after! (smiles) BRAVO!!! I love it, sweet Sunny! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunnyOne~ Your heart flows so lyrically in this piece. VERY nice ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Watersign6... SOLD!! I love thumbs in the upright position! Thanks!! Greeneyes... My heart is my muse is my inspiration is my frustration.....etc!!!! I thank you!! Walker... Hi and glad to see you always!! Thanks!! ethome... Maybe...there is always a chance, is there not? Thank you!! Sandra... Aha..you know me too well, lil sis!! But I just couldn't seem to fit 'Nantucket' in there!! Thank you!! Noah... oh yes... a limerick is good for the soul!!! Thank you!! Marge... I thank you and am happy to see you at my door!! Thank you so much!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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