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RebeccaJoy
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0 posted 2001-06-07 01:24 PM


That I would know love
I also accept the pain
loving you has brought

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ethome
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1 posted 2001-06-07 01:27 PM


Where does that pain start? Why does that pain start?  Wonderful write!
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2 posted 2001-06-07 01:27 PM


and that is all one can do...

lovely!

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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3 posted 2001-06-07 01:35 PM


Perfect!

This is the gist of so many movies and lives all rolled into a senyru.  Well done! BRAVO

ArticulatedSigh
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since 2001-05-30
Posts 26

4 posted 2001-06-08 02:30 AM


That I would willingy
die to spare you any pain is
clear as the sun rise

But I write no more
no pens to heart bleed staining
so far so very tried

One last line for you
to know real in all of time
love tried and tried and...

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