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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
~*~ summer me in woulds simmer me then in cotton yes, cottonwoods would ~*~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
summer me in waves summer me in waters blue yes,ocean me true ~SEA~ * beautiful inspiration......thank you!  |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Summer's my career I'd simmer you and with love summer you all year [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-07-2001).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Clever! I really like it! Love the first line! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
summer me in do's then winter me, fine, in don't's whatever you do don't ever say "Shoo!" and please never autumn me in won't's a departure from the form but closer to my norm and I couldn't help myself so I didn't ye gads! spring ahead on that one!  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
wood you please repeat I sense there may be deceit or errors replete |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Very clever, made me smile, I enjoyed this one very much. Regards, Olias. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Oh, thank you all for the responses, and the poetry in kind! |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Simply gorgeous! |
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