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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-06-07 12:23 PM

silver slender spires
gather thoughts of our inspire
to lift us higher

write with grace, all others lose face;
"Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 06-07-2001).]

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

1 posted 2001-06-07 12:40 PM

Peircing the sky
it spills where the thoughts touch
silver union

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-06-07 01:09 PM

beautiful!

RebeccaJoy
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 35

3 posted 2001-06-07 01:26 PM

This brings back wonderful memories. Thank you.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-06-07 01:48 PM

wow! syllabic perfection and rhyming!!!

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

5 posted 2001-06-07 02:29 PM

Very nicely done,
it's slender though,
I used it for inspiration.
Changing yours slightly
and added to it a bit.

Silver slender spires
Gathering thoughts to inspire
To lift us higher
In the coolness they’re thrilling,
Beautiful light spilling

Gloom

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2001-06-07 02:33 PM

beautiful.....beautiful.....such beautiful thoughts.

love it.

Charisma

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

7 posted 2001-06-07 02:44 PM

You lift me with your beautiful verse. Thank you.

Regards,
Olias.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-06-07 02:47 PM

Beautifully said

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

9 posted 2001-06-07 09:53 PM

written with words from a poetic hearts pen
how could i not enjoy this one my friend!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2001-06-08 12:08 PM

Silver linings draw
Iridescent grace upon
Joined inspirations

(sigh) Sucha beautiful vision created in such a small number of syllables! I found my heart leap above these silver plumes and over the continental divide to gaze upon your sweet words of inspiration! (smiles) Beautiful haiku, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

11 posted 2001-06-08 12:49 PM

glimmers, this does!

Enjoyed

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

12 posted 2001-06-13 01:11 PM

Thank you all so much for the wonderful comments, and the lovely responses!

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