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Stealing an inward glance
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Stealing an inward glance |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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I looked far with a searching gaze Starting from a point quite so near Through the distanced remote passage For as much as my eyes could stare. I saw these lights from outer space, The luminous giants of expect Sprinkling rays of buoyant upbeat Into the depths of inner space. I closed my eyes to feel the feel Of dolphins jumping with wide smiles, Of life blooming in pleasant glow, Of songbirds singing, winged and free. I felt the green grass, young and fresh Dancing like reeds in flowing breeze Eden no more remained a dream, It was right there where I could feel. Sincerely then, I thanked my gaze Realizing how things do change, If one just wished to see inside What one wished to have seen outside. ~*~ [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 06-07-2001).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great poem, Sudhir... and advice I should heed more often. *S* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sudhir- this is beautiful my friend! i have missed reading your work so much and am glad i had the chance to see this beauty today. great writing, very inspriring and lovely as always. take care amy  "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
A beautiful vision, Thanks for sharing! Debbie |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
 Enjoying this....very much! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderfully written my dear friend...simply fabulous! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir--What a wonderful look through your eyes. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautiful words Sudhir, a vision I think we all wish would be come a reality. "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
i love it and will read it again my friend |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
suthern, thank you very much Amy, your visit makes this one so special... thank you a lot Debbie, thank you for reading, my friend Decaflame, I am glad that you are enjoying this… thank you Ethome, my friend, your words never fail to lift my spirits. Thank you Martie, that's very kind of you. Thank you Brian, thank you, I am smiling at your well-judged response Watersign, I am grateful for that. Thank you. Regards to all, Sudhir |
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