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Poeminister
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0 posted 2001-06-07 01:30 AM



Abracadabra!
Cauldrons boil, words toil, love's lust
Speaks with secret spells

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Logan
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1 posted 2001-06-07 01:42 AM


Ahh, Poeminister, is it all not secret spells? well said...smiles
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with you
2 posted 2001-06-07 02:03 AM


secret spells of love
enchanting words from your heart
.........in moments like these...........





~SEA~

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2001-06-07 06:26 AM


Ah Poeminister ... you've captured the wonders of love magically in this wonderful piece!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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4 posted 2001-06-07 09:19 AM


Nicely woven....tight with great repeating sounds to strengthen the effect..I enjoyed!
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2001-06-07 09:26 AM


your incantations
sweet, entrancing, lovely spells
hold me prisoner

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


Kethry
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6 posted 2001-06-07 09:45 AM



Keth  

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



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7 posted 2001-06-07 10:04 AM


Cpat Hair,
Do not drink, sip only. Good

Irish Rose
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8 posted 2001-06-07 10:52 AM


what an incantation!

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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9 posted 2001-06-07 11:13 PM


Whew, such a powerful sweet intoxicating spell indeed! I can feel the wizards spell flaming inside of me, burning gently. (sigh) I always seem to feel a little lovesick when I read poems like these for I am longing for my first love. (sigh) Such a wonderfully spellbinding haiku! BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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