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One More Hour |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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One More Hour ~*Marge Tindal*~  Would that I could love you one more hour this night One more kiss of heavenly bliss one more chance at sweet romance before the morn breaks light One more hour of loving you in moments oh, so tender Wrapped up tight in loving delight exhaling of sigh on sigh breathing you in sweet surrender One more lifetime of loving you would be my fervent prayer Beyond the measure of perfect treasure hearts holding inspire of desire Stay, sweetheart, take me there ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Sigh, Marge, you are outdoing yourself, what an image, what a thought..what a...ahhh,this poor one doesn't have the vocabulary...gentle smile |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ Thank you for your company this musing night. I think your words were 'just right' ... and greatly appreciated by this lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Would that I could love you one more hour this night One more kiss of heavenly bliss one more chance at sweet romance before the morn breaks light ======================== ahh what an enchanting musing... yes...let the night be Unending... beautiful longing write Margie-girl perfect  me |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
more than wonderful |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
A very lovely thought |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Love another hour stay within these hugging sheets this dreaming's bower Lovely writing... Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-07-2001).] |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
How may time I too have tried to hold on just one more hour...well written...deeply felt. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge......damn......the tears just popped out.......and spilled over......direct hit my sweet friend.......a direct hit  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh this was so beautiful, but I feel so badly that you had no lasso to hog tie him with Margie girl! ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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KirstyOHara New Member
since 2001-06-07
Posts 9Australia |
This is a lovely poem. Congrats on such great writing |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully lyrical and flowing Marge, tender words so softly written ... very lovely indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks everyone. SEA~ You make my day ! *Sometimes we rush through life without taking that extra hour to revel in loving moments. Too quickly an opportunity passes us by. Savor the moment of expelling a sigh ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Such gentle and loving words... so very well expressed... nice work |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and here I thought I was to be empty-headed all this day without a new thought, and this here just popped up, and popped one in.... thank you for that! thank you for this! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
All the nights I would give for that one more hour....this is precious to me...thanks Marge~  hugs to you...Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I don't know who's been tickling your fancy lately, I just hope they keep it up because you're writing some beautiful romantic poetry!!! I think I know what I'm talking about but maybe not! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Marge my dear friend, you are such a sweetheart....you always know how to touched us with your beautiful attractive poetry. (((hugs))) Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Here comes ole number 458. SUPERB! BRAVO! AUTHOR! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CPatHair~ Thanks so much. Karilea~ You are always welcome to a 'pop-up' of mine ! GreenEyes~ Thanks for a touching reply, sweetie. Charisma~ I'm happy to share with someone as lovely as you ! Kirsty~ Welcome to Passions ! Thank you. Kit~ I sure appreciate your thoughts. PoeMinister~ Thank you sooooooo much. ForeverInBlueJeans~ I appreciate knowing that you enjoyed it. JanetMarie~ You're a doll !  ETHome~ *Tee-Hee* Maybe yes ... maybe yes ??? Got a little 'tickle-me-fancy' muse ... InterLopingAlong~ And across the finish line - #458 ! ! *Hugs*~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
lovely very lovely |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marge~ This was just what my heart needed tonight...my goodness you weave it like an angel..your graphic is absolutely stunning as is the poetry that joins it~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sweet sigh) Oh my gosh, this poem made my heart flutter, this poem floods with so much soft sweet love from your angelic heart! (sigh) To love for a whole lifetime is indeed living heaven on Earth. (sigh) This poem made my heart melt, it's sooooooo beautiful! You always write of native american legends and love and so much more so very well, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KelliKay~ Thank you. ButterfliesDC~ Awww ! Angelic thoughts ... Hmmmm ! Just what I need ! Thanks, hon. Noah~ Well ... I hope you liked it ! ! Thank you, sweetie. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
May bliss be a never-ending feel, a feel above feels, a life above lives, and love above loves... muchly enjoyed this one, my friend and regards to you, Marge, Sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Thank you for sharing your thoughts, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
How beautiful and tender! Sometimes there just aren't enough hours in the night for love. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tara~ My goodness ... it's soooooooo good to see you in here ! You've been missed lady ! ! Thank you for enjoying this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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