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So Full Of Moon

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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 06-06-2001 10:32 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal


So Full Of Moon
~*Marge Tindal*~

O' my love
on nights like this
I am so full of moon
In silver slivers of light
falling into emerald eyes
beneath auburn tresses
so curled in perfection
Spilling you into my
forevermore~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-06-2001 10:38 PM       View Profile for Logan   Email Logan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Logan

Ah Marge, sigh..you do have such a feeling to you and oh those emerald eyes, and auburn tresses, geez..wonderful...gentle smile
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2 posted 06-06-2001 10:42 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Me too, Marge...Me too!
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Awwww..so beautiful...i am amazed at the way you introduced certain lovely images within such a few lines....
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well, I'll stop writing now....
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Logan~
Thanking you
so very much for
such a sweet reply
to my monthly Luna
pennings from this
poetic heart
~Marge

~Martie
You know I
always think of
you when I pen a
'Me too' piece of
the moonglow
Marge~

Kaile~
It's that moon
I tell you - drawing
light from the night
and slinging it into
my little inkwell
~*Marge

~Karilea
You will not !
Grab a moonbeam
and continue to shine
Mix rays of the sun
upon this night of
perfection
Marge~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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           Margie moon
         kissing my night
       my dreams with beams
      so full of them bright
      I shall every ray keep
      when wake or in sleep
        as I sing or snore
          for ever-more


Now I'm full of moon  


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Marge~ I love when you do this with the moon.....makes me sigh and reflect......   ~SEA
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PoeMinister~
How sinister to reply
in sleeping lullaby with
a snore - you tickle me
and I laugh with glee
at a smile that you
left on my door
~Marge

~SEA
With loving eye
I watch you sigh
knowing that your
tides are moved by
the same moon
Marge~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 06-07-2001 04:55 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

I am mooned again...

Enjoyed muchly, my friend

Regards to you Marge,
Sudhir
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10 posted 06-07-2001 05:42 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

I enjoyed not only the beautiful poem at the beginning Marge, but all the continued comments throughout this thread!  You are a marvel ... and you've simply got me smiling here!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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Margie
moon   maiden
paint  the night,  in
poetry of pure delight,
go  on and shine, be
your best as  you
give   credit
to the
    ~
       ~
          ~
            R
               e  
                s
              t

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.


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Sudhir~
Mooning you
in fullest delight
Shining across the
world this night
Bringing smiles
~Marge

~Kit
A moon of
smiles falls on
my face at finding
your reply in place
Thank you for a
sunshine day
Marge~

Kethry~
Look at you just
glow and glow across
the pages your words
do flow-My friend
I enjoyed so !
~Marge

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nice way to paint the poem..form and words fit so well.. good work!
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Beautiful thoughts, and painted images....

hugs to you... my friend...


Lauren~


***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

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Aw Marge you're just such a romantic and the words, yes the wonderful words, make me want to come back..........forevenmore!
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Ohhh Marge I like this one very much, very mystic and sensual or is it sensual and mystic, well either way its perfect. Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.
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*sigh* Marge all I can do is to view this beautiful moon and to sigh again...as luna shines so bright through your pen.


((hugs))
Charisma
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Beautifully done, Marge! Very lovely, indeed!
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19 posted 06-07-2001 09:23 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Do I ever love being "mooned" by you Marge, and the imagery was awesome!
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~CPatHair
Glad to know you
enjoyed Luna's view
That's exactly what
I do too She glows in
welkin sky - leaving
such gentle sighs
Marge~

GreenEyes~
Across the night
I know that you are
watching her Luna waltz
with the twinkling stars
Sharing a glow for all
to see - Thanks for
sharing with me
~Marge

~ETHome
Romantic thoughts
swept with such light
landing in a gentle heart
on this very special night
Finding lovers that glow
with the ecstasy of
sweet Luna show
Marge~

OLIAS~
Mystically she
rises - sensuality she
brings - So I guess that
you are right 'bout both
of these things - Catch
a glow of her show
She is glowing
~Marge

Charisma~
In full view - this
Luna dance - giving all
the lover's a chance to
poeticize in such a way
as to wish her to stay
She will return again
next moon's full
~Marge

~Denise
Such beauty of
this wonder is never
lost in eye of slumber
She commands that we
write poems of her
stunning beauty
Marge~

Mysteria~
Mooning has become
second nature to me now
I think I have to write 'em
so that perhaps a fantasy
cow will always be able
to jump over a moon
~Marge

~Thanks
Everyone of
you for such a
fantastic fun time
Full moon done
She smiles
Marge~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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21 posted 01-23-2008 11:08 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal


~Absolutely amazed
that once I possessed
such an abundance of time
to write the moon in rhyme
in a profusion of Luna verse
cross the path of our Universe
seeking to leave the glow of
such pure everlasting love
found nestled in the file
of my archived thoughts
in keep for sharing~


**Just enjoying all of these moon rhymes**
Yep, I sure am~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Somewhere in time~


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Ah these are wonderful Marge!
So good to read them once again.
And also great to see so many members names from  past years.
Hugs and prayers that your recovery will be swift.
Love you, Nancy
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Wonderful indeed, dear Marge, moon-lady!
Wishing you quick healing from your eye-surgery, so that you will be able to watch "the wondrous nightly companion" in a true mesmerizing close-up.

Nancy-Enchantress, I miss you so!! How are you?

Love and hugs to you both.
Margherita


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24 posted 01-23-2008 06:19 PM       View Profile for icequeen   Email icequeen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for icequeen

Marge - this is soooo beautiful. I'd love to share it with my poet niece, she of the emerald eyes and auburn tresses.

~Caroline~

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My dear poet friend, you have mail
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